Ch. 15 & 19 (all formats): use of "resided" when it should be "presided"
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Mary Y.
27 July 2007
Ch. 1 (all formats): "
Like the only other person in the room, a honey-colored leman who had her head buried in his lap." is a fragment and will be fixed in the print version.
Ch. 6 (all formats): "
Adrienne wanted to tell him she’d had a crappy night thanks to her
magically
amplified nightmare..." -- "magically" should be "magickally".
Ch. 7 (all formats): "
Khursid didn’t see this exchange since he
hadn’t face
them when..." -- "face" should be "faced".
Ch. 10 (all formats): "
Malik
back
away from the kiss with a reluctant look..." -- "back" should be "backed".
Wanna-be Typos
(but they aren't):
Ch. 1 - 6
"Magic" and "magick" are spelled differently on purpose to show the difference between the entity alive on Bron -- magick -- and the hocus pocus stuff we're used to seeing -- magic.
Ch. 8
"
But people
don’t
destroy the originals when they make a copy." -- while this looks incorrect, it's not. There is a grammatical term for this and when I have time I'll research it. Suffice to say, it's not wrong.